davidbrucehaiku: he could have waited

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HE COULD HAVE WAITED

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He could have waited.

He did not. And now I see

Just an empty bench.

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Inspired by HappymessHappiness.

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11 Responses to davidbrucehaiku: he could have waited

  1. David, this is a wonderfully wistful and haunting haiku!! I really loved this! Which one of HappymessHappiness’ pieces inspired this? I would like to read it, if that’s ok??
    Chuck

  2. just_me says:

    This really made my day, guys! Thank you! Thank you! 😍😍😍

  3. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come read David’s beautiful and wistful – “He Could Have Waited”

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